not bad but not good
I like the Idea. but the execution was a little off. the animation was cute but choppy, the music kinda got boring after a bit, but it fit the mood of the animation. all and all I gave you a 2 because I think you have a lot of potential on this site. work heard and let see if we can get you on the front page. and if that is true about this being your first, I'm even further impressed. keep in touch and let me know if you need any help with animations. I do a littel from time to time.
KEEP IT UP